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she is supposed to be celebrating her 13th birthday. she is supposed to be singing and dancing at her birthday party. she is supposed to open lots of presents from her friends, from her mother and father, from her grandparents. she is supposed to be surrounded by joy and smiles and party tunes. she is supposed to laugh like crazy watching a clown show her father arranged for her. she is supposed to treasure this day in her memories, down the line. she is supposed to think about what amazing things are waiting for her at her 14th birthday. she is supposed to eat a chocolate cake, and share the pieces with her friends. she is supposed to have her picture taken blowing out the candles on her birthday cake. she is supposed to blow at the little polaroid picture that captured her joy, that captured her friends. she is supposed to go around showing the polaroid picture to everyone, then proudly post it in her photo album she got as a present not moments ago. she is supposed to have fun. she is supposed to go to sleep happy, tired and smiling.

she is not supposed to lie in my arms, having just found her, with a hole in her little heart, blood everywhere. she is not supposed to have the horrified look on her pale face, in some old, dirty basement. she is not supposed to have her life end.

and with this scene - my life ends as well. trusted, greasy gun in my mouth.
:iconb0x0rz:
mature content for a reason.
posted under fiction, for it would be too sad if it was true, and nobody wishes to believe that it could be true, anyhow.

based on true events.

**previous part: declassified information .5
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`Hyazintha Jul 4, 2010  Student Digital Artist
I will come back here. :)
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:icondarknessisinmycloset:
Okay, I've read all of these, because the first was in a group I've watched. What do any of these have to do with fairytales? I loved the edge these's have got to them, and I think I'll watch you, but I'm confused.
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:iconb0x0rz:
why would they have anything to do with fairy tales? :b0x0rz:
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:icondarknessisinmycloset:
Never mind, I was kinda high on sugar at the time and very confused.
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!ndstotler Oct 25, 2008  Student
oh damn. you have to do another one!!!! :D
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:icontorikins:
This is touching.
I just got shivers as i read it.
Extremely well written.
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~xrandomstuff Jan 21, 2008  Student Artisan Crafter
Sad, yet well written.
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:icondrd69:
Damn....
Just came back to DA after a long hiatus, this and its precursers are the first bits I've read, powerful and interesting. Very sweetly done. Really like the slow gradual realisation. Thought provoking.
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:iconapathysends-love:
I really like this writing style. It's very gritty.

<3
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~finniii Jul 12, 2007   Filmographer
err...

no... it's good, just...
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