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i want to learn what's it like to wake up in the morning and not feel sad.

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no one would talk to me in austria. no one would even look at me in new zealand. no one would dare touch me in congo. they think of me when they are lonely in lebanon; they think of me when they are lonely in spain. they do not know i am lonely too. i am lonely as a sand grain in the deserts of libya; i am lonely as a snowflake in the fjelds of finland.

nobody cares that i am lonely in russia. still - i will always be free, and you hate me for it in czech republic.
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posted under fiction, for it would be too sad if it was true, and nobody wishes to believe that it could be true, anyhow.

based on true events.

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Mood: Humor !ndstotler Oct 25, 2008  Student
you don't get very creative with your comments D<
it's the same thing every time!! :lmao:
but thats okay. cuz the stories rock. ;)
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~length-of-time--0 Feb 22, 2007
wow.
i really don't know what was just going on-
but it was incredible.
i loved it.
immensely.
the ambiguity, the anger, the insanity.
it was wonderful.
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~diamondie Nov 20, 2006  Professional Writer
I like the structure a lot. I have a thing for short stories that don't have a real plot even though they tell things. Still the ending feels a bit too ambiguous to me.

And we don't have mountains in Finland! They're fjelds.
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`b0x0rz Nov 20, 2006
i shall fix that soon. thank you very much. now when you mentioned it i remember learning about it in geography classes :b0x0rz:
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~faile88 Nov 19, 2006
"I am lonely as a sand grain in the deserts of Libya; I am lonely as a snowflake in the mountains of Finland."

I love this line! :D Good job!
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~faile88 Nov 19, 2006
Ack! And I forgot to say good luck in the last comment. :blush: So...

Good luck! Hope you do well! :D
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~illyria-godking Nov 14, 2006
The life of a secret agent is always such a lonely thing, isn't it? The desperation is expressed well here. The need to be unnoticed to go about one's business but the desire to be seen and recognized as a person so completely at war with one another . Good Job.
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~ADDinfusedcreativity Nov 13, 2006
This, to me, is one of those things that just strikes you in such a way as to render you speechless about it.
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~spydragon Nov 12, 2006
I'm in Lebanon and I think that this is an excellent conglomerate of words into a precise and well expressed feeling.
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Mood: Wow! ~Aniramix Nov 12, 2006
Yes, I think of you when I'm lonely
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