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i want to learn what's it like to wake up in the morning and not feel sad.

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a little bee came to me.
"will you escort me home?"
"no. i have to go home. i'll be late."

(a minute later)
to myself...
'WHAT THE FUCK DID I JUST SAY?'

(an hour later)
to myself...
'WHAT A COMPLETE IDIOT I AM!'

(a day later)
to myself...
'FUCK YOU. I AM NEVER TALKING WITH YOU AGAIN'

(a week later)
'I CANT BELIEVE I WAS that STUPID.'

(a month later)
to god... if he exists... doesn't hurt to try...
'god. please turn back the time.'

(a year later)
to god... if he exists...
'I HATE YOU TOO.'

(two years later)
to myself...
'YOU DISGUST ME.'

(five years later)
to myself...
'well... it's all my fault.'

(ten years later)
to myself...
'what a complete idiot i am.'

(a lifetime later)
'i wish i died the moment i said it.'
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mature content for a reason.
posted under fiction, for it would be too sad if it was true, and nobody wishes to believe that it could be true, anyhow.

based on true events.

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!ndstotler Oct 25, 2008  Student
umm. interesting. :D
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~GrotesqueSplendor May 21, 2006
Ah regret... incredibly horrible feeling. Greatly exposed here, the way you've showed all the phases, all the thoughts that cross one's mind. I especially liked this one:

"(a year later)
to god... if he exists...
'I HATE YOU TOO.'"

And that is because this thought has crossed EVERYONE'S mind! Dont deny it hehe and this subtle detail, "if he exists...", also pleased me for when one's in such a regretful state, one questions His existence. Good point ;) The feeling of craving still endures, you get the reader's attention to keep reading (as far as i'm concerned) and to know what the hell is going on hehe

One thing tho, I didn't quite successfully get to the point of the 'bee'. I couldn't associate it with anything. Im curious, why a bee?
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^KasumiCR Apr 15, 2006   Digital Artist
Definitely shows how much it sucks when you make mistakes you'll regret for the rest of your life...


:hug:
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~im-fine-again Apr 15, 2006   Photographer
I've just read the entire series of these and i've got to say that they're amazing. There's vagueness about all of them that leaves the reader asking the question "why?" but informative enough to keep real interest and imagination. I look forward to seeing some more of these in the future... :+fav:
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